OMG HER STORY WAS EPIC, AWESOME, JAW-DROPPING, SPECTACULAR, BLA BLA BLA!! While searching for grammar mistakes, I kept thinking of my own story and the - cough - plentiful mistakes I probably made.
I didn't really suggest a lot of content changes as the original SHOULDN'T BE CHANGED OR I'M GONNA GET VIOLENT. Just kidding, just kidding. Sort of.
Every time I peer edit, it makes me more aware of changes I need to make or how I can improve. It also makes me ecstatic to know I'm helping someone out. Even if it's Lea. Nah, just kidding. I liked helping her out a lot because she's my best friend!! Yay best friends!! :D
It's also fun to know that what you're looking at is not the finished project but a masterpiece in the making. Exciting! And it always makes me happy to see people taking my advice and making changes. NINJA GLOMP! Don't ask.
That's all for now, folks! Catch you on the flip side!
I'm glad you found my story to be so capitalization(sp?)-worthy, Shnelby. :3
ReplyDeleteI'm afraid of violence, but yeah, yay best friends! :D
That's great :)
ReplyDeleteAre you eating too much sugar, Shalby?? :x
ReplyDeleteGreat job lifting Lea up with your feedback and humor. Really looking forward to seeing your story tomorrow morning. What is this Ninja Glomp, and is it classroom appropriate?
ReplyDeleteOh Shelby! How I love you and your humor :)
ReplyDeleteThe "I'm gonna get violent part" was funny and totally you. The bits of randomness you threw in there were fantastic editions.
The ninja glomp is totally appropriate Mr. Kelly! It's like a hug, except you sneak up behind someone, hug them, and then run away. :D We made it up, yayz!
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